Revision Process

November 8, 2016 | | 1 Comment

My current revision process includes looking back on what I didn’t do well in my second paper and changing that in my third paper, for example, introducing articles and having a more narrow thesis are some of my weaknesses. Using what we workshopped on Monday has helped me continue with my draft and approach it slightly different as to how I did with my second and first papers. Additionally, as I continue writing I always have in my mind if what I am writing is enough analysis earlier on in the paper as opposed to waiting until I am finishing up my paragraph to include it. Lastly, I am mainly making sure all of my sentences make sense and flow nicely together.

– Naomi Bracho


1 Comment so far

  1.    xianruichen on November 9, 2016 2:42 am

    Your paper is decent and I learn a lot from your paper. Hope to read your paper again something in the year.

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