My essay didn’t really have an intro. It was all back round information. Also because I gave so many details to the book I was using, I severely limited myself as to who and what I could talk about throughout my essay. I used a lot of repetition. I’m going to whip out for my word revisions. Structuring an essay is still very unclear for me, but at least I’m aware that is something I’m horrible at. My thesis is still too broad. Peer editing really helps with that because what I write makes sense to me, but not to others. My greatest tool in revisions is bugging others to help me. It’s actually better than the writing center because the tutors there try to guide my writing rather than say I suck.


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